Shes really good at putting her own opinion in inside of the paraphrasing or quotations. She doesn’t always use it word for word but it looks as if she knows she only using the important stuff because it makes it sound a lot more professional and credible. She is also good at putting out a quote and helping better understand what the quote is talking about. She almost dumbs it down for us. Uses most of her quotes and paraphrases at the beginning so towards the end she can elaborate more on her goal and argument of the topic. Very long introduction. Lots and lots of quoting could have probably used less for more of her own words. After looking at it again my opinion starts to change.